Ghost in the Darkness - First Iteration

Ghost in the Darkness - First Iteration
Ghost in the Darkness - First Iteration by Karen Eastland

Hi all, this was the first iteration of the song. I really quite liked it, but thought the second would be better. Then I thought, why not ask you what you think? It contains a new verse and other alterations I make to the initial poem of the same name. Ghost in the Darkness is a combination of two small poems. One bore the same title as the song, the other was titled, In Dream.

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